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Nathan Slake's avatar

This feels aptly timed, Brian, though no doubt it was written some time ago.

An arresting and beautiful poem.

I am captured by this stanza. For me, it could be an entire poem itself.

If I survive the terrible forest

and the hills do not break my body

and I arrive at the fire that fuels

the dance through these hills,

I fear what one becomes

for in fire the physical is consumed,

trunk charred then limbs blackened

and all brought low to earth and ash.

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Brian Funke's avatar

It was written in June and JulyтАжbut yes the timing is wild, in the same way the kinship series with so much focus on the land and water was just after hurricane HeleneтАжthough I suppose when you invoke nature in writing in this era, how could you not bump up against its strain.

IтАЩm glad you liked this piece!

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