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Hans Cox's avatar

Aside from liking your use of alliteration and consonance, I like that I, the reader, who ascended before the poem began, now descend to the river, while realizing, through that deacending journey - I imagine myself floating down in the air - the meaning of the adcending and acended mist. There is a unity in the opposites here, of ascent and descent. One knows the one through the other. Thanks for this poem.

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Brian Funke's avatar

Hans, beautiful commentary and feedback. It makes me happy you found yourself in this place!

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Hans Cox's avatar

Thanks, and sorry for the typos! :-)

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