A poem
Brian, this poems evoked some thoughts I've been mulling on aging of late. Thank you for this lovely piece that spoke to my longings.
"Time is not the enemy, she declares"
"Age is timeless."
"To travel through time
and follow a path..."
Excellent! Makes me happy when a few words that flowed through me also flow through you!
Here we have an instance of “we are all connected.” :)
'beauty is food
for the wise' .
It surely is Brian, maiden, oh maiden, what a beautiful ode to her golden hair.
I’m glad you liked it!
Beautiful 💛
Thank you Ann 🍂
Glad you gave us this one, before fall gives way to winter . . .
This is a lovely poem, so evocative. I got to it through your essay about it and your project Garden Poems. I look forward to more of them.
Thanks LeeAnn! I appreciate you reading💫
Beautiful.
And of course my favourite line is this:
"and read the canyons in her trunk" 🤯👏
oh, haha, I *had* read this before! For some reason I thought I hadn't. Well, I just picked the same line as my favourite a second time, so I shall leave my comment here and not delete it. ;)
Ha! If it caught your eye twice, I promise not to edit the line in a future version 🙃
As will all your poems, this is a beautiful meditation.
"and read the canyons in her trunks."
Love this line and all its meanings and imagery.
Thank you sir!
So many good lines in your poems. I especially like
of white lnowing
on this black surface
of we
Thank you Frederick!
Beautiful!
Thank you 🙂
Really nice imagery Brian. I really like the lines about the egret.
Thanks! I like that stanza…the placement between the tree imagery did some sort of highlight on it…
Brian, this poems evoked some thoughts I've been mulling on aging of late. Thank you for this lovely piece that spoke to my longings.
"Time is not the enemy, she declares"
"Age is timeless."
"To travel through time
and follow a path..."
Excellent! Makes me happy when a few words that flowed through me also flow through you!
Here we have an instance of “we are all connected.” :)
'beauty is food
for the wise' .
It surely is Brian, maiden, oh maiden, what a beautiful ode to her golden hair.
I’m glad you liked it!
Beautiful 💛
Thank you Ann 🍂
Glad you gave us this one, before fall gives way to winter . . .
This is a lovely poem, so evocative. I got to it through your essay about it and your project Garden Poems. I look forward to more of them.
Thanks LeeAnn! I appreciate you reading💫
Beautiful.
And of course my favourite line is this:
"and read the canyons in her trunk" 🤯👏
oh, haha, I *had* read this before! For some reason I thought I hadn't. Well, I just picked the same line as my favourite a second time, so I shall leave my comment here and not delete it. ;)
Ha! If it caught your eye twice, I promise not to edit the line in a future version 🙃
As will all your poems, this is a beautiful meditation.
"and read the canyons in her trunks."
Love this line and all its meanings and imagery.
Thank you sir!
So many good lines in your poems. I especially like
of white lnowing
on this black surface
of we
Thank you Frederick!
Beautiful!
Thank you 🙂
Really nice imagery Brian. I really like the lines about the egret.
Thanks! I like that stanza…the placement between the tree imagery did some sort of highlight on it…