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Nathan Slake's avatar

Wow, yeah, so beautiful. I love the way this picks up and essentially takes flight itself by the end, with the change in structure and cadence. I'm sensing a seasonal shift in outlook here, too.

"and wide set fire kiln eyes," <hands down my favourite line, and I can almost imagine you knew I'd pick this one.

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Jason McBride's avatar

Reading this feels like watching a bird "Flutter, flitter, float, fly." I love seeing your poems in my inbox. I know it's going to make my day better!

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