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Troy Putney's avatar

This is a gorgeous poem, and I absolutely love this stanza:

There may be

a natural explanation

to this mystical exchange

but let’s not delve into that.

Let’s relish the vibrant place

we have stumbled into,

and live from this moment

into all other moments,

knowing this is as

real as your hand

in mine.

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Reena Kapoor's avatar

Stunningly beautiful!

PS. Substack does need a few more formatting degrees of freedom especially for poetry!

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Brian Funke's avatar

Agreed! Thanks Reena!

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Andi Penner's avatar

I look forward to reading more, both poetry and process.

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Brian Funke's avatar

Thanks Andi, glad you’re here and good to submeet you!

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Andi Penner's avatar

Submeet. Good one! Thanks to @Winship for recommending your site.

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Susie McGaughey's avatar

Sitting on my front porch now reading this lovely poem. Beautiful

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Brian Funke's avatar

I’m glad! It seemed like a good day to publish this one.

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Linda Funke's avatar

Beautiful! Both the moment and the description

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Brian Funke's avatar

Thanks, glad you enjoyed!

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