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Kassi Wilson's avatar

“but the soul celebrates around every bright bend and in each dark chasm”

This is a great line, and brings out the contrast nicely between the mind and soul.

The soul doesn’t want to rush like the mind.

“Haze” nice word for: life’s unknowns

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Nathan Slake's avatar

Yes, "rainbow of whites" and also "coins of water and a snaking river of fire".

Lovely imagery, Brian. I imagine flying through the sky and looking out the window of a plane and seeing all of this.

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