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Kim Nelson's avatar

Your process notes are as compelling as the completed poem.

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Nathan Slake's avatar

I love these comments and thoughts on process, Brian. Fascinating.

Amazing photos, too.

"I was left with a mess that I loved. There were individual lines that I knew were right, the themes were compelling, and while I could not make sense of it all in my mind, I liked something about the progression. It was a felt knowing." This is so good. Even more so that some of the theme was there but you weren't fully aware until reading the comments after posting the poem.

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