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Its autumn for my friends in the southern hemisphere, so it makes sense to bring this poem forward. Also, poetry transcends seasons…
Blasphemy
Garden walks #6
1. Today, this day, this brilliant, blessed day I sat silent on a buckwheat cushion stock still to listen to the silent sound that bubbles up like a babbling spring, the spring I lean over to fill my parched bones, my hollow bones, now filled with clear water silence. Inside has spilled its secrets and I stand solidified, rooted and ready to grow another ring, stepping toward the oaken door I reach for the handle and turn three ribs till they crack, pull gently and open so my heart may cross the threshold to the wild outside. 2. Pond of sky, sky below and earth above, all is upside down, for where is my face in this pond of sky, clear, clear as can be, brown eyes reflecting all that flies above, and when I look up, I am not there. 3. The sun is low in the eastern sky, night comes, truly, all is not as it seems. 4. Yesterday, a gray sky of two thousand pounds. Today, a blue sky I see stars through. 5. Autumn is not silent like snow in winter. The dense oak forest whispers in its bare top and squirrels skitter over an oaken ground, mystical prayers permeate my in and out breath not the prayers of the pious standing behind an oaken pulpit, but the decrepit cushioned in their walk on three inches of every brown-hued oak leaf. 6. I will hurry to the ridge, for the sun is almost touching the lips of the western earth. And there I am, west is west and sky is up, and my shamed ego is proud. Always proud, how quickly I find who I am, forgetting who I am. 7. The sun sets and in a final brilliant ray asks me What is your name? I answer I am.
Thank you for reading! What strikes you, speaks to you, or stirs in you while you read this piece? I look forward to whatever dialogue happens here, and as always, I will be following up with a Reflection essay on how this poem emerged into being.
Brian
"I reach for the handle,
And turn three ribs" 👏👏
Along with
"and my shamed ego is proud"
Those are my favourites, the first anatomically lovely, the second profound.
Lovely poem, Brian. Rich and lovely.
Love all of these! 5 is my favorite.