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Nathan Slake's avatar

Firstly, stunning photo.

Secondly, stunning lines. You captured this one quickly and profoundly.

These are especially stellar:

layered with crimson curtains

that fate hung across the sky,

rolling red waves of jeweled fabric torn apart

We didn't manage to drive out anywhere dark enough to see it by eye, although my phone camera could just about make it out. I hope there's another burst and I'll get to see it with the naked eye.

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Constantine Markides's avatar

"we drove for dark and dark we found"

this line works on its own. a very different meaning ("darker," you could say) without the rest of the stanzas. strong, it tolls

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